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my backpack was heavy
my ride was waiting
i looked for you
in all the wrong places
then i turned down that hall
and lo and behold,
I saw you
it was just a glimps, but I did
i started to walk down the hall
thinking of something to say
but i thought of nothing at all
then I saw her...

she was jumping on somebody's back
giving them a hug
i dont know who it was
who was carring her as their burdon
but I do know what I saw

she was wearing your jacket
with your two little pins
all bright and shiny
that stuck right out
of that sea of tears
that covered my eyes
as I saw her wearing your jacket

your brand new jacket
that I had helped you earn
that I had never warn
with its blue and its gold
your special jacket
she was wearing it

this may sound stupid
this may sound absurd
but the emotions I felt
were heavy

i couldnt bring myself to stay and see
her
all wraped up
warm and cozy
in your jacket

I ran... I fled
down the hall
out the dorr, vowing not to go back

but alas, I did
and you saw me right quick
I couldnt escape
I wanted to run
I wanted to hide
I wanted to cry
I wanted to die
because of what I had seen

I couldnt look into your eyes
because mine were full of tears
I asked you to come with me
and you did
i couldnt wonder any longer
about what I had seen
I asked you
"why is she wearing your jacket?"
you said you were hot, and that she had been cold...
but the reason slipped over my ears

you dont know
how much you hurt me that day
by giving her your coat
such a simple action
can hurt one so much
i may never feel the same
after what I have seen
©2004-2009 ~ActressL2
:iconactressl2:

Author's Comments

um... this is a poem about something that happened to me on friday after school. I dont mean to offent anybody, Im just expressing my emotions. it may sound really stupid, but its something that really upset me.

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:iconfallingobsession:
*shakes head* This is all just too complicated... I don't know what to say... I know it's upsetting but... I don't know... :O_o:
:iconactressl2:
its ok, you dont have to say anything

--
Bridget

:)
:iconvincentvalkier:
is this guy your boyfriend? if he is, i guess i can see how this could upset you so much.... sometimes something small stirs up alot of emotion... at the same time, whats wrong with a guy giving a girl his coat because she is cold? that just seems like a nice gesture to me.... any nice guy would do it. mebbe theres some other factors u didnt put in the poem?

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I am the heretic who cannot be burned
:iconactressl2:
ya that would be it... the second thing I mean. I guess I wish the guy I was talking about was my boy friend, and no dani and anyone whos getting ideas, that doesnt mean I like him... back to my reply. The girl who was wearing his coat HATES me with a passion, she acctualy wants to kill me, my rents saw, made me tell, she got in trouble, now she hates me even more... LOTS of fun!!! ya so, thats kinda what upset me. also the guy hasnt been the same after he broke up with an exbest friend of mine. very complex

--
Bridget

:)
:iconvincentvalkier:
ahh, i see... well i hope you and her can work stuff out eventually... nobody likes enemies anyway

--
I am the heretic who cannot be burned
:iconvincentvalkier:
and also maybe theres some stuff about that other girls life that you dont know u know?

--
I am the heretic who cannot be burned
:iconactressl2:
ya. I know there is a lot of stuff about her that I dont get. I guess I just kinda over reacted, but it really hurt me to see her in his jacket, when he wont even let me wear it... I always give him mine. Its not so much about her, or maybe it is. I duno... I guess I just felt betrayed

--
Bridget

:)

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